Abhay is sitting in the Car. He says in mind, ‘Mom, I have got the stone with the help of which I will be able to see the way ahead. Now I just have to wait for the twilight. Before the moon vanishes this stone will show me the way ahead’. Abhay turns his face sideways. He sees Pia sitting on the front passenger seat smiling at him.
Pia: Why are you looking at me like that Abhay?
Abhay: Pia… You are here? Are you really here? (Pia smiles)
Pia: Of course I am here Abhay… Touch and see! (Abhay cups her face with his hands)
Abhay: Pia… You love me…right?
Pia: I love you very much Abhay… I have forgotten the whole world in your love. The whole world is one side… and our love is one side… Just you get this potion and your Mom becomes alright… then we would never turn back and look. We will always stay together… no one can separate us Abhay… (Abhay cups her face again)
Abhay: Pia, I was only waiting for this moment… (Pia vanishes. Abhay realizes that she was his imagination. He says, ‘Focus Abhay… focus! Come out of your dream world. Concentrate on your goal! Focus!’)
At the Dobriyal House, Arnab and Mr Kashyap are talking.
Kashyap: So Misha did not see who attacked her… But that boy has seen… Abhay… (Arnab and Kashyap sit on the chairs in the Hall)
Arnab: No Mr Kashyap… he can’t be trusted… because if Abhay knew what happened there… why did he say a lie? Why did he say that it is a snake bite when it was not like that? He is involved in this… it is sure… But in what way… it is necessary to find out.
Kashyap: Mr Dobriyal, Misha knows that Abhay saved her life and you also should be grateful to him. (Arnab nods) Thank God! Abhay saved her… and it is possible that he only removed the entire poison from Misha’s body. If Abhay is not a Vampire then he definitely has seen that Vampire. What is Abhay’s truth I do not know. But I know this much that Abhay is that link who can help us reach that Vampire (Arnab nods).
Arnab: But Misha told that she was attacked by a lady. Who is this lady? Why is Abhay lying? What is the connection?
Dipanita is tied in between two pillars using ropes. A lady Vampire wearing hooded gown is standing in front of a well opposite Dipanita and doing some ritual. The Vampire finishes her ritual and goes and lights the lanterns on the pillars. She then removes the hood from her head and it is Tanushree. T turns to face Dipanita who is trying to remove the rope from her hand.
Dipanita: Who are you? (Dipanita raises her voice) Who are you?
T: It’s a long story… an age old story…
At the Raichand’s House, Chand makes a call to Abhay. Abhay who is driving the Car picks up the call.
Chand: Abhay, Where have you reached?
Abhay: Why? What happened? Mom is alright?
Chand: Just get home now… I cannot tell you over phone…
Abhay: Okay… (Abhay is driving the Car. He thinks, ‘Now what happened? Dad was never tensed up like this… How will we save Mom?’
At the Khurana House, Jeh is standing in the Hall facing the window. Alina is coming down the stairs to the Hall. Jeh thinks, ‘Mom, You were telling right! Alina cheated on us. Our family has scattered. You should have come back. If the Police search for you let them. But this time I need your help Mom. Protecting the secret is most important than anything. You will have to leave that Vampire. Whoever it is… this time it is not as important as saving the potion from Abhay’. Alina comes and stands behind Jeh…
Alina: Brother, listen to me…
Jeh: Alina… Go away from here… I do not want to talk to you… Leave!
Alina: But I… (Jeh raises his voice)
Jeh: I said leave… (Alina goes from there. Jeh calls Dipanita on her cell phone. The mobile rings but no one picks it up. Jeh tries again but gets no response. Jeh calls someone and tells that he needs their help. Jeh tells that Dipanita is not there and now the Vampires are in possession of the map. Jeh orders the person on the other end that he needs to see everyone immediately and cuts the call).
At the Raichand House, Abhay and Chand are talking. Chand is sitting on a chair near the fire place and Abhay is standing behind.
Abhay: Without asking me how can they take such a big decision? How Dad?
Chand: They gave you a lot of chances… and they knew that you take decisions sentimentally like humans. (Abhay is angry). You let your entire clan for the sake of Pia. And look where you are… You are standing by Hasina against the entire clan… I want you to realize Abhay with success come freedom… and with freedom come responsibility… You tell me… If a Vampire becomes sentimental like a human would you be able to tolerate?
Abhay: I know the laws change with time… and we have to change too! But I do not wish to argue about it now. (Abhay goes and sits on the chair near Chand) You know what Dad? We are running out of time… We will have to save Mom at any condition. But if you want to give it the name of human weakness… so be it! I alone am sufficient for those Vampires… (Chand laughs)
Chand: Just what I wanted to hear… I am proud of you Abhay… Now tell me… what is the plan? (Abhay places the map he drew on the table)
Abhay: This is that map with the help of which we can reach that potion. As soon as we get the remaining portion of this map we will be able to save Mom… After that no one would be able to reach Mom… neither our own people nor the werewolves… or any power… (Chand looks at the Map)
Chand: Are you sure this is the right map?
Abhay: Yes Dad! This map is divided into many pieces. We have two of it which I drew from my memory. Because the first piece of this map is with the Khuranas… and that is a magical one the secret of which only Alina knows. There are many pieces of this map. After finding all the pieces and joining it all a full map will form. And when the full map is formed with the help of this stone and whole map we will be able to reach that magical potion. And the key to reach that magical potion is with only Alina. She will help us reach there. (Chand lifts the stone and looks at it)
Pia enters Misha’s room.
Pia: Misha… (Pia runs and hugs Misha by sitting on her cot)
Misha: I got so many hugs that I feel like I should go to coma again.
Pia: You scared us all…
Misha: Oh Piya… Please don’t start. Now the Doctor has checked and gone. (Misha points to the bite marks on the neck) Only these marks are remaining… everything else is okay… (Pia looks at the mark) You understand the words coming out of my mouth? (Pia thinks, ‘I need to find out whether the poison inside Misha is fully gone or not. But if a Vampire has bitten her then…? No! I am sure nothing would happen to her. But I will have to find out who it is Abhay hiding from me… for whom he even lied to me…’ Misha looks at Pia) Hello! What happened? Have I developed horns on my head? Stop staring man! It’s me! And I am alright…
Pia: I wasn’t staring… I was thinking something…
Misha: About Abhay?
Piya: yeah!
Misha: Well Pia… when you meet him say thanks to him. I mean… seriously man… Abhay saved my life! If he would not have been there… I mean he reached there so fast and he saved me from that woman. Pia, If he would not have been there I would not have been alive. What all have I not talked of him and he was innocent.
Pia: You know what Misha… you are right… that’s enough!
Mish: Oh! So many Dialogues… Stop it now! What is the use of saying it again and again? Just be normal!
Pia: Okay Psycho!
Misha: Okay Dumbo!
Pia and Misha together: Whatever! (They laugh. Misha takes a book and starts reading. Pia says in mind, ‘Abhay, What is the truth? If you do not want to tell then don’t tell. I will ask someone else. Like you they won’t lie to me for my safety. I will ask the person who knows the importance of the family’).
Dipanita: You have taken me under your control? How? Who are you?
Tanushree: I am seeking revenge for 200 years… (Flashback: Mythili and Abhayendra love story. Abhayendra in imprisoned and Mythili saves him only to be set to fire by her father. Abhay tries to save her but Mythili dies in the fire).
Tanushree: But this story of love did not end there. I never stopped loving Abhayendra. For him I gave up my human life and became a dead human. And when I reached here to meet my love … my love had gone far away from me. Pia… Pia seized him from me. I had imprisoned Abhayendra in ice grave and only his real love could have got him out of there. But I made a promise to him…that I will return in every age and every form... to end the love story of him and Pia... And I will not let Pia's love story to succeed. Never! Never...
Chand comes down the stairs to the Hall. He says, 'Abhay is not at home'. Pia is standing in the Hall.
Pia: Uncle... I have come not to meet Abhay... but Hasina Aunty... (Chand thinks, 'Why has she come to meet Hasina? What does she know?')
Chand: How is your sister?
Piya: She is alright Uncle... She regained consciousness.
Chand: She told you anything? Who attacked her?
Pia: No Uncle... Actually I had some work with Hasina Aunty...
Chand: She is not in town now... She is out of town...
Pia: Okay Uncle... When she comes back ask her to phone me... Something important! (Pia walks from there. She thinks, 'Like Abhay Uncle also would not tell me the truth.. He also will only lie to protect his people... This time only Haseena Aunty can help me').
Chand is sitting on a chair and talking to Abhay on phone.
Chand: Abhay, Where have you reached?.... Okay! I feel Alina can help us. Pia had come here. She was asking a lot of Questions. I am going to Hasina (Pia is hiding outside the window and listening to the conversation) This is dangerous! You take care! I have to warn Hasina and I should be careful too! (Chand walks out of the House. Pia hides. She thinks, 'Haseena Aunty is here? What danger is he talking about?') Episode ends.
Friday, October 21, 2011
21st October 2011 Written Update (Episode 292) Maithili returns as Tanushree to put an end to Abhay and Pia love Story
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Labels: Abhayendra and Maithili, episode 292, Jeh and Alina, Pyaar Kii Yeh Ek Kahaani Episode 21st October 2011 Written Update, Tanushree

Monday, June 6, 2011
6th June 2011 Written Update (Episode 190) Jay saves Pia from the Police Inspector by taking the blame of Neel’s Accident
Jay and Pia brings an injured Neel to Hospital |
Pia is driving the Car and she gets a call from Misha. Pia lifts the Call.
Pia: Hello!
Misha: So Madam, How was your Blind date? Who was he?
Pia: There was no Blind date Misha. It was a trick by that stupid Jay
Misha: Oh! He likes you? Wow!
Pia: No, He doesn't like me okay. He called me there to insult me again. Anyways I also bashed him a lot. I am coming home. By the way, How is Panchi? Is she okay?
Misha: Panchi? She is a different chapter. That loser Neel called her 47 times and she became so angry that she switched off her phone. Full on stress man...
Pia: Poor Neil!
Misha: Poor loser! Anyway, you come home. Catch you there!
Pia: Okay Bye!
Misha: Bye!
Pia puts down the phone and thinks, 'Poor Neil...I really feel bad. He really might be in love with Panchi. And what had he done? He only gave flowers. I don't know why Panchi is doing like that. I think I need to go home and talk to her'.
Pia is driving the Car and sees a Man walking through the middle of the road. She presses the horn by the guy resumes walking through the middle of the road. Before she could do anything she hits him with his Car. Piya hears the screams of the Guy and stops the Car after going some distance. She gets out of the Car and go running to him. She sees the Guy bleeding and unconscious. She shakes him and shouts for help. She sees the Guys mobile and dials the last call number. Jay who is driving the Car picks up the Phone. Pia informs Jay that she ran over somebody with her Car and he is seriously injured. She tells him that she needs to take him to the Hospital and she does not have any one to help.
Jay: What? Neel had an accident?
Pia: I don't know who he is. He was walking through the middle of the road and I ran over him with my Car. Please help me!
Jay: What do you two sisters think of yourself? One breaks his heart and the other one tries to kill him. I mean...what is wrong with you Guys?
Pia:Stop it Okay? This is not the time to fight. I don't know he might lose his life. I need to take him to the Hospital...
Jay:Okay, Where are you?
Pia: Ridge Road
Jay: Ridge Road...? I am in the other part of the city. You do one thing..You take him from there to the Hospital.I will meet you there. Listen to me... Get into the Car and follow my instructions...From where you are go straight...take the first right then second left and then right. See you at the Life Care Hospital. Just go now...
Pia: Okay!
Abhay in the Ice |
Ice Block on Abhay melts on Pia's touch |
At the Dobriyal House, Panchi is lying on the Cot browsing on her laptop and eating chips. Misha enters the room.
Misha: Hey Birdie... Where is your Cell Phone? (Misha sits on the Cot and takes Panchi's Mobile and looks at it) What the hell? I was calling you for a long time and your phone was switched off.
Panchi: Why were you calling me on phone? I am here at the house.
Misha: So to talk to you I have to come from the Hall to the room or what? I am tired. By the way, Why is your phone switched off?
Panchi: Full day I have to keep chatting or what? (Misha picks the bowl of Chips in front of Panchi and starts eating. Panchi seizes it back)Give me this and get your own from the Kitchen. (Misha takes the bowl of Chips again)
Misha: Are you mad? I will go back to the Kitchen or what?
Panchi: I forgot how Misha Baby has to work hard. Okay, let's do one thing! let us give all our staff phones. When you need something call and order.
Misha: That is a superb Idea fatty! I will appeal to Momma...(Misha takes Panchi's phone)
Panchi: God save me!!! (Panchi notices her phone in Misha's hands and takes it back) Misha, what are you doing? What the hell are you doing?
Misha: What is your problem? Oh...You are avoiding someone... Who?
Panchi: No One!
Misha: Liar! You don't know to tell lies...You are fully transparent... Tell me...What is the matter?
Panchi: I told you...a clingy Guy is behind me...He has already given me 47 miss calls.
Misha: Is he a loser?
Panchi: Big time loser!
Misha: But the matter to think here is that why a Guy is calling you...Did you give him money?
Panchi: You know what? You are not funny at all...
Misha: But seriously you would have given him some hint that is why he is so enthusiastic...Did you not say I love...
Panchi: Shut up! Stop right there...I did not give any such hint... I don't say such nonsense!
Misha: You should have done something.
Panchi: No!
Misha: You are a liar Panchi!You have serious issues. these days you are becoming a tease type of girl...And you better watch out... If you keep doing it you will be in big problems. I mean pick up Guys and then break up with them... Just because you are bored...It is not right! Don't behave that way...
Panchi: Misha, just shut up! And mind your own Business. I am elder to you... Be in your limits...And what do you know about all these things? Did you ever have a Boyfriend in life? Interfering fool... (Panchi gets up from the bed and walks to the dressing table)
Misha: You are guilty conscious. That is why you are scolding me...No Guy will behave in that manner unless he feels the other chance...Just think about it... (Misha picks up the Bowl of chips and leaves the room. Panchi stands in front of the mirror as if doing a soul searching).
Jay and Pia are in the Hospital. The Hospital staff are taking Neel into the ICU. The Doctor stops Jay from entering the room.
Doctor: Please stop there? Is he related to you?
Jay: Yeah Doctor...He is my Brother...my Cousin...His name is Neel. he is 23 years old and his blood group is A negative.
Doctor: See this is a road accident. So it is a police case. I think we have to inform the Police.
Jay: Okay Doctor! (Piya walks to Jay)
Pia: God! I hope he becomes fine...
Jay: Poor Pia...You are feeling sad, right? It is a Police Case now.
Pia: No Jay! I just hope he becomes fine and... (Jay signals her to stop)
Jay: Just let it be? From when you started caring about others other than yourself? Just let it be... (Jay keeps his hand on head in frustration. Both Jay and Pia pace around or look through the door while Neel is been attended by the Doctors.)
Jay tells the Inspector that he was driving the Car |
Inspector: According to the Doctors your Brother was drunk heavily. Whose vehicle was it? Who was driving it?
Jay: Sir, I was driving the Car. (Pia is shocked and get up from where she was sitting)Neel had called me to pick him up as he was drunk. I was almost near him when he suddenly came in front of the Car. I tried to put the brakes but it was too late. Neel was unconscious. And if I was not driving slowly maybe he would have been hurt more.
Inspector: Miss Pia...Pia Dobriyal, right? (Pia nods)
Jay: Sir, She is with me...
Inspector: Were you present at the accident spot?
Pia: Yeah...We both were going to pick up Neel only when he came in front of our Car. He was drunk... (Inspector looks at Jay who was not looking straight into eyes. Jay turns to Pia and speaks to her, ' It's okay Pia. Everything would be alright...Just don't worry!'Pia nods)
Inspector: Thank you!
Jay: Thank you Sir!
Inspector: We will stay in touch with you.
Jay: Please...Please do! (The Inspector goes from there. Jay closes his eyes and leans to the wall. Pia goes and stands in front of him).
Pia: Jay, Thank you so much...I don't know what to say...
jay: You don't need to say anything Pia. i did not do that for you. Get that straight! (Jay walks from there) Episode ends








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Labels: Abhayendra and Maithili, Episode 190, Jay and Piya, Jay saves Pia, Panchi and Misha, Pyaar Kii Yeh Ek Kahaani 6th June 2011 Written Update

Wednesday, May 11, 2011
11th May 2011 Written Update (Episode 172) Siddharth takes Piya to the burnt House
Chand tells Haseena that something very bad is going to happen |
Haseena: What happened Abhay?
Abhay: I don't know Mom...I have a strong feeling...Something very bad is going to happen (Abhay's Mobile rings and he picks up the call from Siddharth)
Siddharth: sorry, I am disturbing you now (Siddharth is in the driver seat of his Car) But I just wanted to keep you posted. You know that I hate you so much. After all you always got everything...You got girl...you got Mom-Dad...You got Mom-Dad's pity...and you also got their love. It just gets very annoying you know...
Abhay: Come to the Point!
Siddharth: Ahh so the point here is Point number 1... Today is full moon day Point number two... Today all Vampires look at the Moon very carefully...Point number three...The effect of you biting Piya would be over tonight...Point number four...There will not be any Vampire Symptoms on Pia if you do not bite her tonight...And point number 5 and this is my favorite little Brother... One bite and we are back in Business Baby... (Siddharth laughs. Abhay is angry) And you know what little brother? I did not have to go to Pia (Abhay gets up from the chair) Oh no no no...She herself came to me...and you know why? Because she had a fight with her boyfriend...And now I am a good friend, right? Such a willing listener I am...So there...Tonight Pia would become mine...end call (Siddharth cuts the call)
Haseena: What happened Abhay?
Abhay: Pia's life is in danger... Siddharth is with her... I have to stop him...(Abhay goes from the room)
Pia comes and sits inside the Car.
Piya: Let's go!
Siddharth: Yeah! well,It is a little far but I will drive fast and furious.
Piya: I trust you! (Siddharth says in mind, 'Well, good for me!' Siddharth drives the Car off.)
Abhay comes to his Car from the Mount College Girls Hostel. He thinks, ' Piya is not here also...she is not in College... she is also not in Dobriyal House...So where is Pia? Where did Siddharth take Pia?' Abhay gets into the Car and drives from there.
Angad arrives at the Racing Sppot. T and her 2 Bimbo friends and many students are gathered there. T calls Angad joker from Circus. A hot girl wearing helmets comes walking through the road and everyone including Angad looks at her in awe. T says, 'Hot! Who is that?' The girl comes and gets behind Angad on his bike. Angad asks her who she is. The girl removes her helmet. T and gang is shocked to see Ruhi. Angad is happy to see her and tells, 'What did you think? Who I am...' Angad tells that he knew that she would come. T asks Angad if he want to have the race or he is scared. The race starts with T driving the Car and Angad and Ruhi on the bike. Angad and Ruhi gets ahead of T. Suddenly Ruhi sees Piya and Siddharth on the Car and asks Angad to stop. Angad slows down the bike. Ruhi wonders where they are going in the night. T who was trailing behind overtakes Angad.
Abhay is in the Car. He makes a call from his Mobile Phone. Danish picks up the call. Abhay tells Danish that he searched everywhere for Pia but cannot find her. Danish suggests Abhay to check at Mount Road as there is some race going on there.
Ruhi and Angad tells Abhay that they saw Piya and Siddharth going towards North Road |
Abhay: What is happening Guys?
Ruhi: T and Angad were racing...and she won the race.
Angad: And you know...someone was sitting behind me and was distracting me so much that I lost in the race. She was more interested in looking at other vehicles than me.
Ruhi: I was not peeping into other vehicles. I was looking at Siddharth and Piya. They were going this late at the jungle...I was just worried!
Abhay: Siddharth and Piya? Where did the they go?
Ruhi: I don't know... They were going through North Road. I was little tensed. And you know there is nothing there except that old burned house... (Abhay becomes alert) And Pia... You know how strange she is. Leave all that... You are coming for the Party Abhay?
Angad: Party for losing the Race... (Abhay thinks,'Burnt House? No! SIddharth, You are taking her there?')
Chand is standing near the window with a drink in hand looking at the Moon. Haseena comes and stands near him and look at the moon with a drink in hand.
Haseena: What are you thinking Chand?
Chand: Today is full moon night. How difficult this night is for us...you know that. I feel tonight something very bad is going to happen Haseena.
Haseena: What are you hiding from me? What have you heard from Kasauli? Chand...You don't have to protect me. I have the courage to hear the truth. Just tell me...What is going to happen...
Chand: There is someone who knows our truth.
Haseena: Piya?
Chand: Piya's knowing and not knowing does not make any difference. There is someone who is powerful...dangerous and want to harm us...with whom we have an old account to settle...
Haseena: Who?
Chand: Tonight I will come to know. Got news from the higher ups that this person has been trying to trap us for a long time... That person is coming Hasina...in the midst of us...
Haseena: How is that possible? We don't stay in a City more than a year... Then how that person traced us...how?
Chand: Because someone else is sending our news to that person Haseena. I cam eto know from Kasauli that the person did not find us but got our news from some one else.
Haseena: when will this end? When?
Chand: Never! Because we are dead humans. We cannot die...nor can we live. Always we will stay like dead humans.
Haseena: Maybe that is our punishment, right? (Chand looks at her)
Siddharth and Piya are in the Car. Piya looks at the moon.
Pia: You know Siddharth...when ever I look at the moon I feel a strange pull...Such a pretty sight. You know from childhood the moonlight was always given me a peaceful feeling. But of late this Moon makes me so restless. It feels like it is pulling me towards it. (Siddharth says in mind, 'Vampires relationship with the moon is like that Piya') Anyways, How much more distant the place is?
Siddharth: We are nearly there. Don't worry Pia...Today you will get the answers of all your Questions Piya...
Piya: I just want to know that who was Abhayendra's Brother... Who is he and where is he?
Siddharth: You will find out Pia. This place has the three people's story...Abhayendra, Maithili and her real lover's story...
Piya: You feel that Maithili never loved Abhayendra?
Siddharth: Of course Piya...Maithili only loved his Big Brother. That's why Abhayendra killed those two. Irony is that he also died in the same fire. Poetic Justice...I guess!
Piya: My mind is not ready to accept this even in another life Abhay cannot do bad to anyone. I don't think it is true.
Siddharth: It is not in everyone's capacity to recognize the devil in someone Piya. He is just waiting. It is all an act for him Pia. You sill see that one day he will remove the mask and show him true face in front of everyone. (Pia thinks, 'Is Siddharth telling the truth? Should I believe in his talks that easily? But what will he get by lying to me. (Siddharth watches Pia amused) He did not have a problem to come with me this far. At one side there is Siddharth who is doing everything for me and on the other Abhay who made his entire relationship with me on lies. I have to trust Siddharth because I can't trust Abhay') What are you thinking Piya?
Piya: Siddharth... You remember you asked me if a Vampire had bitten me... I don't know if you will believe me or not but I asked Abhay and he said yes. He said he bit me. Can you believe that?
Siddharth: What? Oh my God! But why did he do that? I thought he liked you...
Piya: I don't know Siddharth... He just kept mum...He did not say anything. He did not have an explanation. It is not as if he was trying to save my life...It is so unlike him. I don't know...
Siddharth: Don't worry Pia. Today you will know... I mean today you would know...You will get all your answers today. (Episode ends)
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Labels: Abhayendra and Maithili, episode 172, Pyaar Kii Yeh Ek Kahaani 11th May 2011 Written Update, Ruhi and Angad

Friday, March 11, 2011
11th March 2011 Written Update (Episode 120) Siddharth kills a girl and puts Abhay’s pen at the Murder Spot
Episode 120 starts with Piya walking on the road crying. She thinks, ‘What is happening with Abhay? How rudely he behaved with me. What happened to our relationship? Even after all troubles there was love between us. But today…today we have become so distant from each other. And Siddharth…what would he be thinking of me? How badly Abhay behaved with me in front of my Boss. This much big Drama…what is Abhay’s problem with Siddharth?’ A Car passes by her and stops ahead of her. Kabir is driving the car and seeing Piya on the road walking he reverses the car and stops in front of her. Kabir gets out of the car and calls her by her name. Kabir comes near her.
Kabir: babe! What’s up? Come…I will drop you home!
Piya: No Kabir, I am fine…I will go on my own!
Kabir: Come on Piya…Don’t be silly! I would drop you…
Piya: Kabir, Please leave me alone… I am…
Kabir: No bloody ways Pia! In this jungle …I cannot leave you alone. It is not safe for you. Come! (Kabir forcefully brings Piya to the car and opens the door for her. Piya sits inside. Kabir then gets into the driver’s side and drives the car. Kabir looks at Pia and sees that she is crying)
Kabir: Piya…I know why you are this disturbed
Pia: What?
Kabir: Piya, I know that there is something between Abhay and Shenaya. I mean…I saw them together.
Pia: Kabir, What is the matter? Tell me clearly!
Kabir: No…It’s nothing Pia
Piya: Come on Kabir, be a friend…Tell me what the matter is.
Kabir: Look Piya, please don’t take me wrong but I saw Abhay and Shenaya together. Both were fighting in such a manner that it is over some personal matter. I think I also heard Shenaya telling that Abhay cheated on her. I don’t know Pia but it looked like a personal matter between them two. Pia thinks, ‘Abhay and that Gym Teacher…why were they fighting? I don’t think Abhay and Shenaya have any relationship. It is not possible. Then what about what Kabir is telling? Why was Abhay fighting with Shenaya? What has Abhay done to her?’
Scene moves to Dobriyal House in next morning. Misha is in front of the mirror applying makeup. She is dressed up in a Sari. She tells to herself, ‘I never thought that I, Misha Dobriyal, would do all this drama in the name of love’. She is uncomfortable in the Sari and wonders how people walk wearing a sari. She then tells herself, ‘Come on Misha and stop cribbing! It’s for a good cause!’ She then takes a bag and puts it on her shoulder and gets out of the room. She comes down the stairs of her house and wishes Hi and Bye to Arnab. She takes an apple from the dining table and walks from there while Arnab and Madhu watch her stunned.
Scene moves to Misha and Shankar outside the house on rent.
Misha: Ready? Ahh…I forgot Mama’s sindoor! Lipstick…lipstick would do…oh God! (Misha gets the lipstick from the bag. She then seizes Shankar’s specs from his eyes and looks into it and applies a dot in front of her hair) Okay? (She gives the lipstick to Shankar and asks him to fix it. Shankar applies it. Misha then takes back the lipstick and hands over the specs to Shankar who wears it) Mangalsutra? (Misha takes the mangal sutra from the bag and wears it) What all I have to do for you people. Here we go…ready? Let’s go!
Shankar: Misha, You are looking so different…beautiful you know…
Misha: You know what? Keep your comments with yourself…I don’t need it…It’s all a game…you get it? So shut up! And follow me… (Misha rings the door bell) Hey, what is your surname?
Shankar: Menon!
Misha: Okay, look! Don’t talk too much inside…Just leave it up to me…I have more experience. Acting is not for everyone… (The land lady opens the door. Misha says ‘hello’ to her and looks at Shankar lovingly)
Scene moves to Misha and Shankar sitting on the sofa close to each other and the land lady sitting on a chair. Shankar keeps his hand on top of Misha. First she slightly beats him with her free hand but when she sees the land lady notices she runs her hand gently over his hand in a loving manner.
Landlady: So sweet couple! How many years since you are married?
Shankar: One
Misha : Five
Shankar: One… Baby not the time since we are dating!
Misha: Oh I see
Shankar: Actually we are childhood sweethearts. Mom-Dad did our engagement while we were at school. Once we finished college…we got married!
Landlady: Wow! Tell me daughter… do you have any nanad-devar in your house?
Misha: What? Who?
Shankar: Baby, He is asking about my sister or brother. Actually she does not know Hindi well. No…I am an only child.
Landlady: And you also…?
Misha: Yeah…actually…
Shankar: No…Misha has a big sister who does job as PR professional.
Landlady: Good! So you would be in good terms with Shankar’s Mommy-Pappa?
Misha: Of course! They love me a lot!
Landlady: What did you say, where they stay?
Misha: London!
Landlady: But you were telling me that they stay in Kerala…
Shankar: Yes…yes…Dad has business in London…So he comes and goes all the time…Sometime London…sometime Kerala
Landlady: So you say Malayali daughter?
Misha: Mallu? No way!
Shankar: No…Misha does not understand. Actually her Mom Dad stays here and she did her studies here. Yeah but her Father has big Business in Kerala…he knows well. (Misha tries to fight with Shankar but controls seeing the landlady watching them. The landlady is convinced with their drama that they are a couple and hands over the keys. Misha grabs the keys)
Scene moves to Piya in her Hostel Room trying to call Abhay. Abhay is inside the jungle walking and his mobile rings. He looks at the call and without picking it up resumes walking. Piya thinks, ‘From morning I am calling you Abhay...but there is no news of you. I am fed up of your behavior.You cannot give this silent treatment to me. I need to talk to you. You will have to talk to me’ she calls Abhay again. Abhay picks the phone this time.
Piya: Abhay, Why were you not lifting my phone?
Abhay: If I don’t want to talk to you I will obviously disconnect your phone. How difficult is that for you to understand?
Pia: What do you think Abhay? You would behave to me as you like? Abhay, how could you raise your hand on me? How dare you do that?
Abhay: I don’t want to talk to you.
Pia: Abhay, You cannot always give me that answer! I am not your personal property.
Abhay: Then leave me! (He cuts the phone)
Abhay is sitting near Mythili’s grave. He closes his eyes and remembers his time with Mythili.
Abheyendra: Mythili, you are happy?
Maithili: Yeah, very much! Every moment I spend with you is precious to me. It is as if my whole life is a dream and you are reality.
Abhayendra: Are you not scared that one day we have to face the outside world? (Siddharth listens to their conversation hiding behind a tree)
Maithili: Your love gives me the courage Abhendra! My heart tells me that we would be together forever! (Siddharth has a troubled expression on his face)
Abhay opens his eyes and thinks, ‘One time you have already burned that innocent love Siddharth. (He gets up) But this time I would not let you do it! This time I am ready. I will not let you hurt anyone’
Scene moves to a girl who is waiting near a tree in the forest. Siddharth comes and places his hands on her shoulder and turns her towards him.
Girl: Ahh Siddharth! How come you are late? You know how long I have been waiting for you here? (She puts her hands around his neck) By the way why have you called me to this forest at this time in the night? Tell me! You know…I love one thing about you. I love your eyes! Don’t know there is something in your eyes which pulls me towards you! (Suddenly Siddharth’s eye color changes and he charges on her and bites her on the neck. The girl screams and finally stops moving. Siddharth gets up and shouts ‘Ahh’ with his fangs visible. He then takes Abhay’s pen which was kept on his handkerchief and drops it near the girl.
Siddharth: The pen is truly mightier than the sword! (He smiles)
Scene moves to Shaurya who is waiting near his Car for Misha. He is happy when he sees Misha coming on the bike and stops her. He goes and hugs her thanking her for helping him get the house. Misha is angry at Shaurya for making her play the part of Shankar’s wife. Shaurya tells Misha that he owes her dinner and Misha tells him that she hopes that he knows that she eats too much. Shaurya tells her she can have whatever she wants. He adds, ‘Because you are so sweet and you are my Queen’. She is flattered by his words but tell him that she would take his leave now as she is not permitted to roam around at night by her family. Shaurya reminds her of the sindoor she is wearing. Misha tries to erase it but it spreads further. Misha tells him that first she got married because of him and now she will have to suffer her Momma’s beatings because of him. Shaurya tells her that he will solve her problem and asks her to sit inside the Car.
Scene moves to Siddharth who is walking after murdering the girl. His mobile phone rings and he picks up the phone from Panchi who informs him that she is in front of his house to get his sign on some urgent documents. Siddharth thinks that he cannot let her see him like that and tells Panchi that he is in the shower and asks her to wait for 2 minutes. He adds, ‘unless of course you want to take my signature at the shower’ Panchi blushes and tell him that she would not take that chance and would wait for him. Siddharth tells her that he would see her in 2 minutes and runs like wind from the forest and jumps into the house through the window.
Siddharth checks himself at the bathroom mirror and wipes of the blood. He then opens the door wearing a black bathrobe.
Siddharth: Hello love! (Panchi feels shy and turns her face after checking him out) If you come without warning I cannot promise you what condition I would be…unless you knew…that’s why you came uninvited!
Panchi: (gives the file to Siddharth) Sir, These documents are very important. Please sign them.
Siddharth: You know today you are looking very beautiful! You are glowing today.
Panchi: Thank you Sir…
Siddharth: Or…you are blushing! Either ways… you look lovely!
Panchi : Thank you! (While Siddharth signs the paper Panchi notices blood on Siddharth’s cheek. Siddharth feels her gaze on him)
Siddharth: Are you checking me out?
Panchi: Actually…there is blood on your cheek…
Siddharth: I was shaving and saw your name on my phone and my hand slipped. Well…I blame you…you murdered me
Panchi: I am sorry Sir…
Siddharth: (nods his head) 7 murders are forgiven for you.
Panchi: (Laughs) that was a good one! Anyways Sir, I will take your leave…all done?
Siddharth: All done! (Panchi takes the file back) I should see you tomorrow my hardworking girl.
Panchi: Thank you Sir!
Siddharth: You sure you don’t want to come in?
Panchi: Quite late! Good night Sir!
Siddharth: Good Night! (Panchi goes off and Siddharth closes the door. He thinks, ‘Oh wow! That was close! That’s good Panchi! Now everyone would know that when the girl’s murder happened I was with my PR Manager’








Tuesday, January 4, 2011
4th January 2011 Written Update (Episode 63) Abhay goes to Pander Palace to search of Piya’s Pendant
Abhayendra and Maithili at Pander Palace Fort |
Misha: What happened? Are you alright?
Pia: Misha… I (The other students also get down from the Bus.The students are shocked to see the goons in an unconscious condition and their jeep turned over)
Angad: (sees the jeep) My God! This jeep…(he keeps hands on Pia’s shoulders) You aren’t hurt, right? And who are these Guys?
Pia: Whoever they are they do not deserve your sympathy. You know what? We got lost in the forest and we took lift from these people…and they misbehaved with me. It was good that Abhay came and did this to them otherwise I don’t know… (The students are surprised)
Angad: You mean Abhay…He did this to 3 of them together…
Piya: Yeah!
Misha: Wow! He man! If I would have been I would have (Misha moves forward as if she want to punch the Goons. Angad stops her)
Angad: You beat the 3 together that much that they are unconscious and have no idea where they are…?
Abhay: They were drunk and sleepy…
Angad: And this jeep?
Abhay: It got out of control and skid…
Panchi: It skid on a straight road and fell on its side?
Abhay: I…I don’t know?
Panchi: How is it possible Abhay? It is strange
Angad: Yeah…that is what I am saying… He beaten 3 of them all alone so much…yeah dude come on…There is no rock here or sign of skid…so how did the jeep turn over friend?
Abhay: What’s with the quiz guys? What do you wish? That I leave Piya with the drunken Guys? You guys need help…You people interfere in everything…and search for conspiracy in it…just get over yourselves!
Angad: What is wrong with him?
Panchi: This trip I will never forget in my life…
Misha: Yeah…for all the wrong reasons…let’s go! (The students get into the Bus one by one. Piya stands there and looks at Abhay who just reassures her with his eyes)
Scene moves to Dobriyal House. Arnab tells Madhu that he got a very disturbing news about Suganth and informs Madhu about Sugandh and his daughter Piyali. He tells her that Suganth did not die in a Car Accident but she died of Cancer. He tells that if the news of accident was fake then it means that his daughter Piyali is alive. Madhu gets worried thinking that now that Arnab knows the truth he would try to find Piyali. Madhu wonders what she would do if Arnab finds about Piya.
Scene moves to Misha getting into the Piya. Piya who is the last person is about to get into the Bus when Abhay calls her by name and comes near her.
Abhay: Piya, I don’t think you should stay at the Hostel. Someone is there who is trying to hurt you again and again. You are not safe!
Piya: Come on Abhay! I am fully alright!
Abhay: No Piya, He attacked you twice. And what happened at the palace can happen again. You have to be safe! You cannot stay alone…
Piya: Come on Abhay! What happened in the Palace could have happened anywhere…
Abhay: And Tracker…I am sure that the person who kidnapped Tracker is the one who attacked on you…And he will try again. You have to be safe (Misha gets down from the Bus)
Misha: Abhay is right Piya! You come home with us.
Piya: But Misha…
Misha: No butts…move your butt!
Panchi: Really Pia…You come along with us home. And it is an order!
Piya: Okay, I will go…right?
Misha: Good girl! If you would not have listened I would have tied you and taken with me… (Piya laughs and touches her neck. She finds her chain and pendant missing. She tells Misha and Panchi about it and they search for it. Piya is worried as it is of sentimental value to her as her mother’s last gift to her. She wonders if she left it at Pander Palace. Misha goes to check inside the Bus. Abhay is worried to seeing Pia worried. Piya tells the driver to go back but he refuses. Panchi also tells her that it could have fallen anywhere, even at the jungle. Piya is sad thinking that her mother's gift to her is lost. Abhay tells in mind, ‘don't cry Pia, I cannot see your tears. I cannot see you crying Pia. Please Piya…I promise. I promise that I will never make you sad’)
Abhay: You people do one thing. You go… I will come with my Dad. He will come to pick me up.
Panchi: Are you sure?
Abhay: Yeah! He called me…He is coming to pick me up.
Panchi: Ok! (To Piya)Come, let’s go… (Pia and Panchi gets into the Bus)
Abhay runs like wind through the forest. He comes to one spot and stops. He thinks, ‘Where can that locket be? I hope that the locket is in the jungle. Otherwise again to Pander…No!’ Abhay closes his eyes and tries to recall their journey in reverse. He realizes that the locket has fallen somewhere in the palace.
Scene moves to Kabir coming into his house. Kabir’s father is sitting on the chair.
Kabir: hey Dad what’s up? (Kabir sits on a chair next to his dad gloomy faced)
Kabir’s Dad: You are back? How was the trip? Driver reached with the car in time, is it not? So tell me…what about Pia? How are things with her? Should I say congratulations? (Kabir gets up)
Kabir: No Dad! She will not forgive me…You know what? I am a jerk (Kabir’s father gets up from the chair) I again fought with Piya today. What all did I not say to her. On top of that I taunted her with Abhay too…No ways Dad… she is not going to forgive me…
Kabir’s Dad: Kabir, Relationships are like sand in a closed fist. The tighter you hold the fist the more sand would fall from the hand. Some days just let her be…Don’t ask her anything. Trust me Kabir, just be a friend for her. Give her time to think. If she really loves you she herself would come to you. If you put pressure she would go away from you.
Kabir: But Dad, if she does not come back then?
Kabir’s Dad: Then she was never yours.
Kabir: Don’t tell like that…Please!
Kabir’s Dad: Look Kabir! Trust me…Give some time and I am sure that no girl can resist my son for long. (Kabir smiles) Be positive! Everything would work out fine…
Kabir’s Dad: You wait here…I will get you a drink (Kabir’s Dad goes off)
Kabir: Thanks Dad! (Kabir thinks, ‘I hope you are right Dad’)
Scene moves to the Bus. Pia is sitting on a seat alone whereas Panchi and Misha are sharing a seat directly on the opposite side of Piya’s seat. Piya looks at the moon and recalls Abhay carrying her through the jungle and touching her face fondly while they are by the pond. Pia closes her eyes and sleeps off.
Misha: This much does not even happen in a College session(Panchi smiles) By the way, Did you notice that love is in the air.
Panchi: Love?
Misha: Yeah, Did you not see? Something is boiling in between Abhay and Piya
Panchi: yeah…Actually I noticed it. I think he likes her.
Misha: I know. It is evident for even someone like me. I don’t know even the R of Romance. But it is so obvious. It is written on Abhay’s sulky face, ‘I love Piya’ (Both the girls smile)
Panchi: True Misha…it is difficult to find what is on the face and actually what is in the heart. Look at me! Danish would turn to be like that…nobody thought. Looking at him nobody would have thought that he would turn out to be a cheater. What is going inside someone’s mind is difficult to understand.
Misha: I know man! Hiding inside is super fine…If you love someone tell them…If you don’t love someone also tell them
Panchi: Everyone is not like you.
Misha: Hey, Everyone cannot be cool like me (Misha and Panchi laugh) It is so obvious that there is something between Pia and Abhay…everyone can see that except them. And that Abhay he comes towards Piya like a magnet. Remember when Piya joined the college she fell from the mountain? Abhay saved her. Today he saved her from the Goons. And in the jungle…In the jungle also he saved her. It looks like Abhay has an alarm with him…whenever Pia is in trouble that alarm rings.
Panchi: Maybe it is called love…
Misha: I suppose so… You think will they ever be able to tell each other?
Panchi: That time only will be able to tell. (Misha and Panchi looks at a smiling Piya and smiles)
Scene moves to Pander Palace fort. Abhay opens the door and enters the Palace. He looks around and then upwards. He remembers the past. He sees Mythili running through the upper corridor and smiles. Mythili runs and comes to Abhayendra, the human form of Abhay centuries ago, and they look at each other. Abhay’s eyes gleams and he is happy. Suddenly the scene vanishes in front of Abhay and he looks around. He thinks, ‘That day I had seen you for the first time. Today also I remember your smile. Yeah Mythili…This many years passed…you went away…and I…I am still here…waiting for you!’ Abhay moves towards Maithili’s portrait. Abhay looks at the portrait. He visualizes Maithili in human form in the place of the portrait and fondly touches her face. Piya who is in the bus suddenly wakes up. Abhay closes his eyes and recalls his past with Mythili. Mythili and Abhayendra are in the bed with Abhayendra holding her closer.
Maithali: When will all this end Abhay? When will we be able to tell about our love to everyone? I don’t want to get separated from you. (Abhayendra touches Maithili’s face)
Abhayendra: Nobody can separate us Maithili…nobody! I am only yours…only yours…forever!
Maithili: And after that?
Abhayendra: yeah! Forever… (Abhay opens his eyes. He thinks, ‘Piya…You are just like her. You both are becoming one in my heart. How is this possible?’) Episode ends.








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Labels: Abhay and Pia, Abhayendra and Maithili, episode 63, Panchi and Misha, Pander Palace Fort, Pyaar Kii Yeh Ek Kahaani 4th January 2011 Written Update
